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제목	No 383th 24th November Saturday 2018

작성일	2018-11-24 22:48	작성자	정순남	조회	4,738

When I woke up, It was snowing cats and dogs since early morning. Today is the day that we are going to go on hike mountain. I suddenly thought a lot. Should we go to hike? or should we stay at home? Actually If it keep snowing , It's dangerous to go on hike mountain. But We started going outside . We didn't talk each other. We were just going to the mountain. We were not worried. We took a bus during the 50 minutes and took a subway during 30 minutes and we bought chocolate and jelly. We may need it when we don't have energy any more. Finally We arrived at 북한mountain. It was stoping snow. Just It is only slippery. A slippery thing is more dangerous on mountain. But We perpared stick and climbing irons. We said each other that we did well about prepare it. We started walking slowly and slowly there. When we walked on the rocks, we were nervous each other and we were horrible. We were cheer up each other, we gave a hand. So we arrived 족두리봉 that was made goal. The snow view that was on the mountain was surprised. Awesome,This blew me away. This is a little over the top? Anyway I felt that we are married couple. We have been married since almost 34 years. When we were dangerous, we were helping each other unconsicously. Who will take care of our life? It's Just me and husband because our life is ours. Fortunately We are back home safety. And We talked that let's go to the mountain next time again and we were laughing. It was dangerous but I want to go to the mountain again. My husband is also same thought. We had appointment with our eldest daughter for dinner at 6pm. We enjoyed for dinner excitely. And we headed to home and we have a little fight about granddaughter. Isn't it funny? Oh~ I forget it. We met a American when we were hiking the mountain. My husband and I asked about wondering. I seemed He likes hiking. He said me he more likes hiking the mountain, and his friend likes jogging at city. So I answered about it naturaly. Your thought is very wise. Really I also think like that. The mountain's air are good more that city's air. I am worried about fine dust. I have a granddaughter. "Natural Heritage."

정순남 137기 (2018-11-26)

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시원스쿨 (2018-11-26)

안녕하세요 회원님.
오늘도 소중한 일기를 작성해주셔서 감사합니다.

1. We took a bus during the 50 minutes and took a subway during 30 minutes
~ 동안을 나타내는 전치사는 for 과 during이 있습니다.
두 전치사의 차이점을 알아볼게요.
for 다음에는 숫자 기간와 쓰이고 기간, 계속을 나타내는 동사와 쓰입니다.
during은 특정한 기간의 명칭에서 ~동안을 나타낼 때 사용합니다.
예를 들어, 크리스마스 기간 동안, 설 연휴 동안 이렇게 숫자가 아닌 명칭의 기간이 따라올 때 during을 사용합니다.
50분은 숫자의 기간이니 전치사 for을 사용하는게 맞겠죠?
-> We took a bus for 50 minutes and took subway for 30 minutes.

2. I seemed He likes hiking.
seem 이라는 동사는 ~인 것 처럼 보이다 라는 뜻입니다.
여기서 주어를 I 라고 하고 목적어를 he라고 하면 말이 안되는 표현입니다.
내가 ~인 것 처럼 보이다 라는 표현이 되기 때문입니다.
그래서 주어에 가주어 It을 써서 뒤에 he라는 목적어를 수식해줄 수 있도록 하는 것입니다.
-> It seemed like he likes hiking.

3. The mountain's air are good more that city's air.
air는 불가산명사 입니다.
공기를 셀 수 없기 때문이죠.
불가산명사를 수식하는 동사는 반드시 단수동사를 써야 합니다.
-> The air on the top of the mountain was better than in the city.

다음 일기도 기대하겠습니다.

감사합니다.